A work of art that I like very much is the Paris Garden painted by a famous french artist named Toulouse Lautrec.
The first time I saw this paint was when I was at college, in my art class. There I have to choose one artist, study his life and copy one of his works. I remember it was very hard to me to copy his work, because I never did very well in arts, but finally I do it great, and I got a seven in my paint and many congratulations of my teacher.
Now a days I love the work of Lautrec, because of my good experience at school and because I get to know his tecnic and now I can recognize all his paints.
The first time I saw this paint was when I was at college, in my art class. There I have to choose one artist, study his life and copy one of his works. I remember it was very hard to me to copy his work, because I never did very well in arts, but finally I do it great, and I got a seven in my paint and many congratulations of my teacher.
Now a days I love the work of Lautrec, because of my good experience at school and because I get to know his tecnic and now I can recognize all his paints.
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Javiera,
Your post is okay as far as organization and word order is concerned and the message is clear. However you have to pay more attention to verbs; be careful when you talk about past events. I wish you had written a little bit more about the painting itself.
JL
A work of art that I like very much is the Paris Garden painted by a famous french artist named Toulouse Lautrec.
The first time I saw this paintING was when I was at college, in my art class. There I HAD to choose AN artist, study his life and copy one of his works. I remember it was very hard to me to copy his work, because I never did very well in arts, but finally I dID it great, and I got a seven FOR my paint and many congratulations FROM my teacher.
Nowadays I love the work of Lautrec, because of my good experience at school and because I GOT to know his tecHnic and now I can recognize all his paints.
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